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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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- The text would benefit from being on the ground plain in less otherwise specified by the costomer.
- Using a program like realflow would give you something much more organic and people would identify with the watter much more.
+ Colour and texture of the water is great.
- The spill is not necessary and leads the eye away from the letters although it's great that you kept the focal point in the first third of the canvas - using the rule of thirds effectively.
- Try a thicker / larger radius on the radius fillet on all the letters. The rounder the more like water they will appear and the silhouette will still be very close to the logo you have now.
- The green piece text is wildly distracting for some reason.
+ glad you made the background white
+ ground reflection is just right, too bright or saturated and it leads the eye away, too light and it's not worth it so you nailed it.
I'd make the dirty water even dirtier - a little greenish to denote sickness but still %90 black, a little bit of bubbles and a faint rainbow, oily reflection in photoshop.
overall it's awesome - I like seeing graphic work done in rhino. and I don't know if I should be so critical but this is a critique so lets say this is a 7.5 out of 10 and you could totally do a 10 if you want to.
animating this would be wild, and watching it fill with oil.
Hope this was helpful and keep improving - super sick!
Matthew
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