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Argentinean Light Attack Tank by ChrisMasna Argentinean Light Attack Tank by ChrisMasna
I'm seriously planning to invade Uruguay.


Just practising organic shapes and concepts in futuristic militar vehicles. (And I was kidding, I have nothing against Uruguay).
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:iconaliskus:
Hmm,critique.It will be my second critique. It wont be really good maybe, i'm sorry ;) And also, my english is not perfect too.So i can make mistakes.

Positives:
*Looks like very fast. It could be very handy in battlefields ;)
*Amazing tank for a leader.
*It appeals to the eye, and very aesthetic. It's colors are very original too.
*Your style and coloring are very cool.

Negatives:
(i couldn't find a negative thing, really i didn't, but i must say something. So i'll try write some negative things...)
*Right-up corner shouldn't be like this.
*I think,you should add a secondary weapon.
*I didn't understand it is symmetrical,or it is not. You should draw it's front side too.
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Pretty cool design, but from studying military equipment and vehicles, I'll just put a few positives and negatives

Positives:
-Looks pretty cool, like something you'd see in cartoons or comics.
-Seems pretty good off road
-Gun depression seems okay.
-Pretty good visibility for the commander/driver and gunner.
-Cannon seems like a high velocity one, making it a good sniper
-Seems pretty good for urban areas or the military police role
-Engine seems to be be in the center, meaning from a head on attack, the tank won't necessarily burn or explode when hit, giving the crew members a chance to get out

Negatives:
-High profile, which means it can be spotted and targeted from long distances
-Too many weak spots, especially the center, the tracks, and radio in the back.
-Doesn't seem to hold as much shells due to the limited space
-Crew members seem way to vulnerable due to them being visible (even if the window is bullet proof, on a tank vs tank situation, if hit, high chance crew doesn't make it)
-Turret seems like a giant target
-Not much angled armor, which means a shell will always penetrate since the armor seems as smooth as a Porsche
-Engine in the center, if it gets hit in the side, you destroy the tank and kill the crew.
-Cannon seems to be limited when aiming up.
-Co axel gun seems way to high, should always be close to the cannon, so when marking a target or eliminating enemy infantry, it's easier to use and aim.


Hope this helped in case you start designing any other military vehicles. c:
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Aliskus Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Thanx for accepting that ;) By the way,this tank is engineering marvel!
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ChrisMasna Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Thank you for the critique. It is always welcome when somebody takes the time to point both positive and negative aspects. :)
btw, it is not symmetrical. think of a crane: at the left the cockpit, and at the right a cannon instead of the crane arm.
I'd like to have the time to make a 3D model of it.
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Aliskus Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Ok,i knew it.Understanded.
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enc86 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
awesome work, this looks awesome!
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ChrisMasna Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
Thanks!
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Bdeatcher Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
STARFOX!!!!......WHAAAAAAT, This is off the chain bro!
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Skoshi8 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So the Malvinas are on hold for now?
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ChrisMasna Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Well, even being Agentinean, I don't support any belic cruzade against the UK...I believe in the self-determination right of the Kelpers.
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AnthropomorPhillie Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ooh...sports car look. :o
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ChrisMasna Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
:D
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